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EXT. DESERT ROAD - NIGHT

Two military hummer vehicles drive down a rocky road. A military truck travels between the two vehicle escorts. All the vehicles have a logo of a lion's head with two swords crisscrossed behind it. The words "EITORIAN DEFENSE FORCE" are printed under the logo.

Close on the leading vehicle.

INT. HUMMER VEHICLE - CONTINUOUS

GEMMA, a woman in her mid 20s, a tough as nails soldier drives the car. RAPHAEL, a man in his 30s, rides in the passenger seat, fiddling with his weapon.

Gemma touches a small circular metallic device implanted in her temple, A MILITARY ISSUED INTERCONNECT. From her point of view we see a map of the road they are traveling through. It's clear that she's the only one who sees it.

                     RAPHAEL
        Since when do archaeological artifacts 
        require military escorts?

Gemma touches her temple again and the map disappears.

                     GEMMA
        Since we're in disputed territory.

Raphael looks at Gemma and smiles.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        What?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Was just thinking how cute you look in 
        uniform.
                     
                     GEMMA
        Raphael, this isn't the time.

Raphael reaches in his pocket and takes out a small box.

                     RAPHAEL
        No time like the present, I always 
        say.

He opens the box. There is an engagement ring inside.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        Staff Sergeant Gemma Antoni, will you 
        marry me?

Gemma is taken by surprise. Her tough as nails demeanor drops and she giggles in excitement.

But before she can answer an explosion flips the car over.

EXT. DESERT ROAD, MAYHEM - LATER

BANG, BANG. Machine gun fire is deafeningly loud.

Gemma crawls out of the car wreckage, dragging the unconscious Raphael out with her. He has a nasty gash on his forehead, but when she checks his pulse she sighs in relief.

Soldiers from her battalion exchange fire with the advancing enemy.

Gemma touches her temple. From her point of view we see a satellite image. She zooms in with a gesture from her hand. We see enemy forces closing in on their location. She swipes the image away.

                     GEMMA
        Damn it. How did we not detect them 
        earlier?

Gemma reaches inside the car and grabs a radio.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        Seventy fivers ground force to 
        Eitorian command: We're under heavy 
        attack. We need air support

Gemma sneaks a look beyond the car wreckage.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        Stronglandian regiments are advancing 
        from the South and the West. We're 
        pinned ...

A grenade flies over and lands a few feet away from her.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        Crap.

Gemma lunges for the grenade and throws it as far away as she can. It explodes in mid air.

Gemma finds herself launched off her feet. The shockwave lifts and slams her into the car wreckage. CRACK, her head hits the metal violently. Even though the helmet she wears provides some protection, Gemma drowns in a cloud of white

EXT. WHITE SPACE

Gemma stands in white space, eyes closed. Raphael's voice echos from the distance.

                     RAPHAEL (O.S.)
        Gemma, you can open your eyes now.

Gemma opens her eyes. The whiteness rolls back like a fog, revealing her surroundings.

EXT. ANCIENT CITY, ROOF TOP - NIGHT

Gemma stands on a roof top in front of a table with a birthday cake.

                     RAPHAEL
                (sings)
        Happy Birthday to you ...

EXT. ANCIENT CITY, ROOF TOP - MONTAGE

Montage:

  • Raphael sings Happy Birthday to Gemma

  • Gemma blows out the candles in the shape of the number 29.

  • Raphael gives Gemma a present

  • Gemma laughs and hugs Raphael

  • They sit and have dinner, holding hands, having a good time.

  • They dance.

EXT. ANCIENT CITY, ROOF TOP - LATER

Gemma and Raphael sit on the edge of the roof, feet dangling. Gemma rests her head on his shoulders.

                     GEMMA
        I needed this.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        You know I'll always be here for you.

Gemma snuggles closer to Raphael. He puts his arms around her shoulder.

Gemma contemplates the view.

                     GEMMA
        This is amazing. Eitoria, what? Two 
        thousand, three thousand years ago?

Raphael smiles, mischievously.

                     RAPHAEL
        Are you sure it's Eitoria?

Gemma looks around and spots a distinguished watchtower.

                     GEMMA
        Yeah. The south watchtower is right 
        there.
                (points to an open 
                area)
        Liberation square.
                (points to a river 
                running to the south)
        The River Wild. It's Eitoria alright.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Oh, but haven't you read "The Road to 
        Strongland"? After two Stronglandians 
        rescue an Eitorian Count's son, he 
        gives the land back to them.

Gemma laughs.

                     GEMMA
        That's a Stronglandian fairy tale. And 
        we all know, all Stronglandians are 
        liars.

Raphael looks off to the distance.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        Wanna hear a story?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Does it start with "Once upon a time"? 
        You know me. I'm a sucker for fairy 
        tales.

Gemma smiles.

                     GEMMA
        Well, once up on a time...

EXT. DESERT ROAD, MAYHEM - NIGHT

Three military jets fly overhead. The ground shakes with falling bombs. Gemma's eyes fly open. Her vision is hazy.

                     GEMMA
        Raphael. Raphael.

Gemma looks around in panic.

                     RAPHAEL
        Gemma, I'm here. I'm here.

Raphael holds Gemma's shoulders, reassuringly. She hugs him.

                     GEMMA
        Are they still out there?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        I think our jets took them out.
                     
                     GEMMA
        What about our payload?

Gemma pick up her rifle and heads over to the truck they were protecting.

                     RAPHAEL
        There is nothing there.

Gemma arrives and checks the truck and indeed, there is nothing.

                     GEMMA
        That's not possible. How did they 
        empty the entire truck?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        They didn't. Our whole mission is a 
        decoy. It must've been.
                     
                     GEMMA
        What?

A few bullets ricochet off the metal body of the truck, forcing Gemma and Raphael to duck behind it. Raphael exchanges fire with the hidden enemy.

                     RAPHAEL
        A helicopter is coming for us. We have 
        to get to the retrieval point. 

Gemma points the rifle mounted light at the ground. There are track marks, as if something got dragged out of the truck.

                     GEMMA
        Look at this. They got something. 
        Maybe the truck wasn't carrying what 
        we thought.

Gemma taps her MILITARY INTERCONNECT. From her POV we see a satellite image of their location. Gemma gestures with her hand and the image zooms to their location. She sees herself and Raphael behind the truck. A few meters away are a group of Stronglandian soldiers, congregating around a box.

Before Raphael could do anything. Gemma takes a hand grenade, unhooks the pin and throws it over. It explodes and Gemma bursts out from her hiding position.

                     RAPHAEL
        Damn it. Gemma.

EXT. DESERT

Raphael goes after her. They fire at silhouettes in the distance taking them out.

They jump over a hill and find a couple of Stronglandian soldiers trying to scramble away, but they shoot them down.

A few feet away there is a large box with the Eitorian Defense Logo, a lion's head with two swords crisscrossed behind it. Gemma points at her eyes then at the box.

They approach it carefully. The sound of an approaching helicopter reaches their hearing.

                     RAPHAEL
        Gemma, that's our ride outta here. We 
        don't wanna get stuck behind enemy 
        lines.

But Gemma isn't listening. She rushes over the other side of the box, while Raphael holds the fort.

There lays a YOUNG STRONGLANDIAN SOLDIER, not more than seventeen years of age, unarmed, wounded and terrified. He holds his hands in front of him for protection.

Gemma points her rifle at him. The light blinds his eyes.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        Take him out.
                     
                     GEMMA
        He's just a kid.

Gemma looks inside the open box and sees a computer server. A couple of wires connect the Eitorian computer to a device the young Stronglandian soldier holds. She snatches it away from him. On the screen are the words "UPLOAD 30% COMPLETE". Gemma tears the wires and chucks it aside. She points her rifle at the kid. The Stronglandian closes his eyes in fear. A tear rolls down his cheek.

                     RAPHAEL
        Finish it up. We need to hustle.
                     
                     GEMMA
        Damn it.

She lowers her gun down and takes a timed explosive from her belt. She sets the timer to one minute and throws it inside the server box.

EXT. DESERT

An explosion lights up the night sky.

Gemma and Raphael drag the young Stronglandian soldier and let him go at a safe distance from the explosion.

                     RAPHAEL
        This is completely outside protocol. 
        Helping the enemy!
                     
                     GEMMA
        He's just a kid.

BANG, BANG, Gemma snaps around and sees Raphael go down with two bullet wounds to his chest. She instantaneously marks the shooter, another wounded Stronglandian Soldier. She shoots him dead. She rushes to Raphael, who's barely alive

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        Oh God. Oh God. You're gonna be 
        alright. Hold on.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        The helicopter. Get to safety.
                     
                     GEMMA
        Not without you.

Raphael takes out the ring and gives it to her.

                     RAPHAEL
        Please. Go.

Raphael dies. Gemma screams in agony. Then points her rifle at the Stronglandian kid and fires multiple shots at him.

The kid raises his arm in protection. But none of the shots hit him. He looks at himself then at Gemma in disbelief. They lock stares for a moment.

Gemma grabs a hold of Raphael and drags him away.

EXT. DESERT ROAD

Gemma drags the dead Raphael to the helicopter. Two other soldiers help her with Raphael's body.

INT. HELICOPTER

Gemma holds a dead Raphael in her arms, as the helicopter lifts off.

EXT. ANCIENT CITY, ROOF TOP - NIGHT

Gemma looks distant.

                     RAPHAEL
        I'm so sorry. I know what it's like to 
        lose someone you love.
                     
                     GEMMA
        If I would've just listened to Raphael 
        and left, he would be alive right now.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Gemma, it's not your fault.

Raphael lifts her chin up. They look at each other for a moment and slowly lean closer for a kiss, but Gemma backs away.

                     GEMMA
        No I can't do this.

Gemma gets up.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        I have to go.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        I didn't mean to upset you. When will 
        I see you again?
                     
                     GEMMA
        I don't know.

Gemma reaches for her head and grabs a hold of an invisible helmet. She pulls it off.

Her image disintegrates.

INT. PSYCHIATRIST OFFICE

Gemma takes off a VIRTUAL REALITY GOGGLE. Strings of light disconnect from her temple interconnect and retract back into the goggles. She puts it on a table beside the seat she occupies. A screen on the table has the words: EITORIAN NET: EITROIAN TECHNOLOGY FOR THE EITORIAN PEOPLE.

She's in a darkened office. A man, THE PSYCHIATRIST, sits at his desk.

                     PSYCHIATRIST
        Is everything okay? You left the EN 
        early.
                     
                     GEMMA
        I can't keep doing this.
                     
                     PSYCHIATRIST
        What did Raphael talk to you about 
        this time?
                     
                     GEMMA
        Nothing important.
                     
                     PSYCHIATRIST
        Did he want to take you somewhere?
                     
                     GEMMA
        No.
                     
                     PSYCHIATRIST
        Did he want to show you something he's 
        working on?
                     
                     GEMMA
        Why does it matter? You told me this 
        Raphael is just a figment of my 
        imagination. Why is what he says so 
        important?
                     
                     PSYCHIATRIST
        Gemma, we talked about this before. 
        The EN created this Raphael character 
        ...
                     
                     GEMMA
        Yes. Yes. Based on my subconscious 
        mind or some crap like that.
                     
                     PSYCHIATRIST
        Yes. He is a door into your 
        subconscious mind. Understanding your 
        interactions with him can help us deal 
        with your PTSD.
                     
                     GEMMA
        That's bull.
                     
                     PSYCHIATRIST
        Is it really that far fetched? Gemma, 
        you practically escaped reality and 
        retreated into the EN's virtual world. 
        And because of your advanced military 
        issued interconnect
                (points to his 
                temple)
        the EN's AI algorithms somehow picked 
        up on your PTSD and created Raphael to 
        help you.
                     
                     GEMMA
        Help me?! This Raphael is a fake. The 
        feelings I have for him are fake. 
        Raphael is dead because of me. And 
        nothing can bring him back.
                     
                     PSYCHIATRIST
        Gemma, you said it yourself, when 
        you're in there with him you feel like 
        a heavy burden is lifted off your 
        shoulders. That was true before we 
        started our sessions and it continues 
        to be true.
                (beat)
        Now we can use that to help you get 
        your life back. Get your career back. 
        Isn't that what you want? 

Gemma grabs her jacket.

                     GEMMA
        Fine. One more time. But that's it.

Gemma walks out.

EXT. LIBERATION SQUARE

Gemma stands by the river in Liberation Square. Behind her is a contrast of history. The south watchtower she saw in the Eitorian Net is in the middle of the Square, but it's ancient, down to the bricks. Making up the back drop is a futuristic cityscape.

Gemma taps her interconnect and we can see her dancing with the real Raphael.

Gemma closes her eyes and goes into a flashback.

EXT. DESERT ROAD - FLASHBACK

Gemma sees Raphael getting shot.

EXT. LIBERATION SQUARE

A tear rolls down her eyes. She taps her interconnect to stop the feed.

Gemma's phone vibrates. She picks it up and looks at it. A message reads: "I AM REAL. MEET ME IN THE EITORIAN NET IN ONE HOUR."

Gemma stares at the message in disbelief.

INT. GEMMA'S LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

Gemma hesitantly puts the VR goggle on. As she does strings of light extend from the googles and insert themselves into her temple interconnect.

EXT. ANCIENT CITY, ROOF TOP - CONTINUOUS

Gemma appears on the roof top in the ancient city. She looks around at her empty surroundings.

                     GEMMA
        I'm here. Where are you?

No answer.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        Is this a joke?

Suddenly the entire world is drowned in red. The sky flashes different shades of red and an alarm sounds.

                     COMPUTER
        Warning this EN Realm is being 
        deleted. Exit now. Warning this EN 
        Realm is being deleted. Exit now.  

The ground shakes under her feet.

                     GEMMA
        You gotta be kidding me?

She reaches for her head and tries to take off the invisible helmet, but she can't. She panics and tries again with desperation. The disintegration of the EN Realm approaches.

The buildings on the horizon start to decay; past them only static.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        What is going on?

The chaos approaches her quickly. After a brief moment's hesitation, Gemma heads towards a scaffold erected by the face of the building and climbs down.

Her weight dislodges a few old wood planks and they go tumbling down. Gemma loses her balance but halts her descent by grabbing onto a pole. As she does she cuts her hand on a sharp edge.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        Aah

There is a strange looking cut in her hand; part organic, part digital.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        This can't be possible.

CLANG. Gemma snaps towards the noise and sees the building next to hers break apart. She climbs down in a hurry.

EXT. ANCIENT CITY, STREET - CONTINUOUS

Gemma tries to out run the disintegration process taking place all around her.

That's when she notices a blue lit sign which reads: THROUGH HERE GEMMA, hung on a nearby building. The window on the second floor is pulsating blue.

Gemma changes directions and heads there.

INT. ANCIENT CITY, BUILDING - CONTINUOUS

Gemma enters the building and climbs up to the second floor. The stairs are almost disappearing under her feet. The blue light seeps from under a closed door. She rams through the door.

EXT. WHITE SPACE - CONTINUOUS

Gemma is propelled through what looks like a digital sink hole which spits her out on the other side. She lands roughly in white space. She scrambles up on her feet, looking around, left and right. Everything is disorientingly white. Then her sight lands on a revolving logo, a lion's head with two swords crisscrossed behind it. Underneath it are the words: "EITORIAN DEFENSE NET (EDN)".

                     GEMMA
        Holy crap. How did I get here?

The whiteness rolls back like a fog. It looks like she's in...

INT. ADVANCED LAB - CONTINUOUS

Gemma hears growling noises behind her. She snaps around and finds herself face to face with a mythical beast.

                     GEMMA
        Oh, this day is getting better and 
        better

Gemma backs up.

The beast charges her. She dives to the side, but not fast enough. The beast head butts her. She's launched backwards and CRASHES into the machinery of the lab. Sparks fly.

Gemma collapses to the ground.

The beast lunges at her. But before it makes contact it explodes into a burst of digital light.

When the sparkles from the explosion disappear, she sees Raphael with a mobile device in his hand.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        What the hell was that?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        It's an anti-virus program, designed 
        to protect the Eitorian Defense Net.

Raphael helps her up. Gemma holds her side in pain. He looks concerned for her.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        I'm sorry I had to put you through 
        this. 
                     
                     GEMMA
        Who are you? Cause you're sure as hell 
        not Raphael.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        I know this must be confusing. But it 
        was the only way I could get you here.

Raphael walks to a computer server. Gemma follows him.

                     GEMMA
        What do you want from me?

Raphael checks on the progress of an ongoing download to a tiny STORAGE DEVICE. He turns back to Gemma.

                     RAPHAEL
        First I want to thank you for saving 
        my life.
                     
                     GEMMA
        Saving your life? 
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Here let me show you.

Raphael presses a few keys on his mobile device. The image of a different person momentarily forms around him.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        Our destiny was intertwined since that 
        day in the desert.

Gemma has a moment of realization.

EXT. DESERT - FLASHBACK

Gemma fires multiple rounds at the Stronglandian soldier, but doesn't actually hit him.

INT. ADVANCED LAB

Gemma backs up in shock.

                     GEMMA
        You! You Stronglandian liar. You used 
        an avatar which looks like my dead 
        fiance to deceive me. You're 
        despicable.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        It was the fastest way to gain your 
        trust.
                     
                     GEMMA
        How did you break into the EN?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        That's the wrong question, Gemma. You 
        should be asking why I broke into the 
        EN. And the answer is, so I can meet 
        you.

Gemma tries to take off the invisible helmet, but fails again.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        It's no use trying. I hacked your 
        interconnect. My algorithm is 
        paralyzing you in the real world. I 
        need you here Gemma.
                     
                     GEMMA
        You bastard! What do you want from me?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Eight years ago your battalion was 
        protecting a computer server storing 
        detailed scans which Eitroian 
        archaeologists took of ancient cities. 
        Cities discovered underground on 
        Stronglandian soil. The damned 
        Eitorian military then blew it all up. 
        Thousands of years of history gone. 
        Just like that. Except for those 
        scans. I'm going to get them back.

Gemma backs away from Raphael.

                     GEMMA
        I destroyed that whole server.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
                (chuckles)
        You really think that was the only 
        copy?
                     
                     GEMMA
        Why do you care about some 
        archaeological scans?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        My connection to the EN isn't stable. 
        I can't get the data out, but you can.
                (taps his forehead)
        Your military interconnect is the key.
                     
                     GEMMA
        I'll never help you.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        I'm afraid, I'll have to insist.

The console beeps. They both look there and see "DOWNLOAD COMPLETE".

Suddenly Gemma kicks Raphael in the chest sending him hurtling back.

She rushes to the console. Raphael catches up with her. They struggle for control over the STORAGE DEVICE.

Raphael gets the upper hand and knocks Gemma down. He unhooks the Storage Device, which is no larger than a tiny thumb drive.

Gemma attacks him, but he easily immobilizes her and takes her in a stranglehold. He tightens his arm lock around her neck. Gemma gasps for air.

Raphael then takes the device and shoves it in her mouth. He uses his finger to force it down her throat. Then clamps his palm on her mouth to prevent her from spitting it. Gemma struggles.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        Swallow it. Come on. Don't struggle.  
        That's it. Good.

Gemma swallows involuntarily. Raphael lets her go. She falls on her knees, holding her neck. A change comes over her. Digital markings travel over her skin, from her core up to her face and into her eyes. Her eyes darken.

INT. GEMMA'S LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

Gemma is in her chair having what looks like a seizure. An array of LEDs in her VR goggle is flashing like crazy.

INT. PSYCHIATRIST OFFICE - NIGHT

The psychiatrist sits at his desk looking through some papers, when an alarm goes off on his computer screen. A message reads: DATA BREACH IN PROGRESS. The psychiatrist types on his computer and a video feed of a man in the shadows appear.

                     PSYCHIATRIST
        It's starting sooner than we expected. 
        Bring her in.

INT. ADVANCED LAB

Gemma holds her head.

                     GEMMA
        What did you do to me?

Raphael kneels besdie Gemma.

                     RAPHAEL
        I used your military interconnect to 
        download all the scans to your brain. 
        I know you hate me, but the future of 
        both our nations depends on this data.

The digital stream running up Gemma's skin subsides. Raphael takes a step back.

Suddenly, two beasts materialize in the middle of the lab. Gemma and Raphael snap towards them. Raphael types a few commands on his device

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        My times in the EN is up. 

Raphael steps back.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        I hope next time we meet, it'll be 
        face to face.

Gemma's anger bubbles up and she lunges at him with a battle cry. But Raphael hits a final key on his device and it explodes. Everything goes white.

INT. GEMMA'S LIVING ROOM - DAY

Gemma exits the EN. She snatches the VR goggle off her head and throws them on the desk in disgust. She holds her head as a wave of pain flow over her.

Her mobile phone rings. She looks at it suspiciously.

                     GEMMA
                (carefully)
        Hello.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Gemma, they're coming for you.
                     
                     GEMMA
        Who is?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Your military. Go to your apartment 
        door.

Gemma takes a few steps to the apartment door. She hears clicking and the door knob moves slightly. Someone is trying to work the lock.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        I really recommend you leave now.

Gemma backs up and looks around.

                     GEMMA
        Are you watching me? Doesn't matter. 
        I'll report everything that happened 
        to my superiors.

Gemma backs up towards her window.

                     RAPHAEL
                (laughs)
        Gemma, they're trying to break into 
        your place as we speak. What do you 
        think their intentions are now that 
        you have top secret data locked up in 
        your brain? 

The door starts opening

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        Don't say I didn't warn you.

The phone line goes dead. Gemma heads to her apartment window.

At the window, she looks down at a ledge which runs across the tenth floor of her apartment building. She takes a deep breath and steps out.

the AGENT walks into the apartment, gun ready, moving carefully. He goes to the computer and examines her VR goggle.

The agent takes out his phone and dials a number.

...