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- Can you relate to the struggles the Protagonists faced?
- Did you root for the protagonists?
- Did you understand and empathize with protagonists' motivation?
- Did you hate the villain?
- Did you understand the villain's motivation? Did you find them convincing?
- What did you think of the growth arc the characters went through?
- Did the character ever act in unexpected ways?
Dialogue
- Does each character have his/her own voice? Or do all characters sound the same?
- Are there any suggestions on how to improve the dialogue to make it more personal/compelling?
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