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A grenade flies over and lands by one of the soldier's feet, SEBASTIAN.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        WATCH OUT.

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Gemma finds herself launched off her feet. The shockwave lifts and slams her into the rocky hill. CRACK, her head hits the rock violently. The Even though the helmet she wears provides some protection, but despite it, Gemma drowns in a cloud of white

EXT. LUSH GREEN FIELD - DAY

RAPHAEL, an a confident man in his early thirties confident man, holds Gemma's hand and guides her through the field.

                     RAPHAEL
        No peaking okay?
                     
                     GEMMA
        Ooh, I'm so excited. How long?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Almost there.

...

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
                (whispers in her ears)
        This is gonna feel a bit weird, but trust 
        me.

Raphael runs his hand on touches her cheek. Gemma leans her face into his touch open palm and smiles.

                     GEMMA
        Okay.

Raphael turns to the portal. It swirls with myriads a myriad of colors.

                     RAPHAEL
        Jump.

They both jump through it.

...

Gemma loses her balance for a moment and opens her eyes.

                     GEMMA
        Whoa. Where Whatdid we happenedgo?

She stands on a roof top in front of a table with a birthday cake. The cake has the number 29 floating on top of it. It spins around slowly. The words "Happy Birthday" are in lit letters on top of the number.

...

Raphael makes a gesture with his hand and the "Happy Birthday" explodes into a colorful miniature mini fireworks.

Gemma laughs at the display and hugs Raphael.

...

Raphael guides her to the edge of the roof and makes a grand gesture intended to encompass the view of the ancient city.

                     RAPHAEL GEMMA(cont'd)
        Oh whoa!Tada.
                     
                     RAPHAELGEMMA
        Oh I didn't want to just do anything, you 
wow!
                know. I wanted something special  
                     RAPHAEL
        I didn't want to just do anything, you know. 
        I wanted something special.

Gemma is mesmerized by the view.

                     GEMMA
        This is amazing. Eitoria, what? Two thousand, 
        thousand, three thousand years ago?

...

                     GEMMA
        Yeah. The south watchtower is right there.
                (points to an open area)
        Liberation square.
                (points to a river running 
                to the south)
        The River Wild. It's Eitoria alright.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        HavenBut haven't you read "The Road to Strongland"?
 
       Strongland"? Two Stronglandians rescue an Eitorian
 
       Eitorian Count's son, who is half Eitorian, half
 
       half Stronglandian.

Gemma laughs.

                     GEMMA
        That's a fairy tale.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        HeWhen endshe grew up he returningreturned the land to the 
        Stronglandian people... Just saying!
                     
                     GEMMA
        Come on Raphael. Are we going to get our 
        history from fairy tales now?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
                (leans closer)
        What if I told you, it isn't a fairy tale.

...

Raphael gestures with his hand and music starts playing. It comes from all around them.

                     GEMMA
        You had me going for a second there for.

Raphael spins Gemma around and then dips her. She giggles.

                     RAPHAEL
        I was hoping it would be more than a second.

They continue slow dancedancing; a couple in love.

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        Sometimes, I just wonder what our country 
        would be like if we're not in constant 
        conflict with Strongland, you know? How much 
        much different our lives will be if a few people 
        people standstood up against the constant war?

Gemma buries her face into Raphael's necksnuggles close to Raphael.

                     GEMMA
        I hear ya.

EXT. ANCIENT CITY, ROOF TOP - LATER

...

                     GEMMA
        Wanna hear a story?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Does it start with "Once  Oh,upon a time"? you 
        know me... I love fairy tales.

Gemma smiles.

                     GEMMA
        Well, once up on a time...

EXT. BATTLEFIELD DESERT - NIGHT

...

                     SEBASTIAN
        We got them. Your message got through. We got 
        got them. WOHOO

Gemma grabs her rifle and follows the other soldiers to inspect the damage.

...

Gemma looks at the wounded soldier. He rests his back against a rock , holding and holds his side, blood seeping . Blood seeps through his fingers , breathing as he breathes rapidly.

Gemma takes a medical kit from her back pack and approaches the soldier.

...

EXT. BATTLEFIELD DESERT - LATER

The Eitorian soldiers are hide behind rocks. They aim their heavy artillery towards the battlefield.

...

Gemma looks through her binoculars.

                     GEMMA
        Hold your fire. He's unarmed.

Two other Stronglandian soldiers approach with a stretcher. They load up the wounded soldier on to it and back up.

...

On the screen, the words "DEREGISTERATION FROM THE EITORIAN NET COMPLETE" flash for a moment and then are replaced by "EITORIAN NET, : EITORIAN TECHNOLOGY FOR THE EITORIAN PEOPLE"

Gemma gets up and paces back and forth, visibly upset. Her phone beeps. It's an e-mail from Raphael, no last name. It reads "SORRY DIDN'T WANT TODAY TO END LIKE THIS. I'LL MAKE IT UP TO YOU NEXT WEEK. I PROMISE."

...

                     GEMMA
        Maybe I did something wrong. I could've 
        waited a bit.
                     
                     TULSI
        Stop it, Gemma. Seriously? You're not 
        actually putting the blame on yourself, are 
        you?
                     
                     GEMMA
        I mean...
                     
                     TULSI
        No. You don't mean. I'm tired of hearing you 
        you put yourself down. Any guy would be 
lucky to 
      lucky to have you.
                     
                     GEMMA
        Well, we both know that's not true.
                     
                     TULSI
        Why don't you get out and meet people. It's, huh? 
        It's always work and home for you. You're 
        missing out.

Gemma looks away.

                     GEMMA
        It's just the connection I have with Raphael. 
        Raphael. It's so.. real.
                     
                     TULSI
        Gemma, you understand you actually don't know 
        know who that guy is. Right? He could be some 
        some creep living in his mother's basement.
                     
                     GEMMA
        No. We've been seeing each other for more 
        than a year now. I would've known.
                     
                     TULSI
        You've been seeing each other in a virtual 
        world. Using Avatars that don't even look 
        like you. Come on. Doesn't that seem weird to 
        to you? Falling in love with someone you've 
        never met.
                (beat)
        Are you sure you're not just trying to escape 
        escape your past?
                     
                     GEMMA
        It's not about James. I made my peace with 
        that.
                     
                     TULSI
        You did? You sure? You guys were about to get 
        get married when he left you because you 
stood up 
      stood up for that Stronglandian soldier. He 
chose his 
      chose his military career over you. That 
        must've stung.

Gemma looks away, hurt.

                     TULSI (cont'd)
        I'm sorry, I didn't mean... I just don't want 
        want to see you go through that again.
                     
                     GEMMA
        I'm gonna put this to rest, okay? I'll sort 
        it out with Raphael. We can't keep doing this 
        this virtual thing forever. I'm gonna find 
out if 
      out if he's serious about pursuing a real 
        relationship... or not.

...

                     TULSI
        If you want my advice, just forget about him. 
        him. He sounds like trouble to me.

...

Gemma appears on the roof top in the ancient city. She gestures with her hand and pulls up another menu.

                     GEMMA
        Find Raphael the owner of this EN Realm.

The menu oscillates and flashes for a moment. "NOT FOUNDNO OWNER REGISTERED FOR THIS REALM" appears.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        SearchWhat? forIdentify Raphaelthe inorigin theof ENthis directoryRealm?

"NO RAPHAEL FOUND IN THE EITORIAN NET DIRECTORYMATCHING RECORDS FOUND"

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        ExpandSearch search for theRaphael last week.

"NO RAPHAEL FOUND IN THE EITORIAN NET DIRECTORY"

    in the EN Directory and 
        cross reference the results with this    GEMMA (cont'd)Realm's 
        creation date.

"NO RAPHAEL FOUND IN THE EITORIAN NET DIRECTORY"

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        That That doesn't make sense.

She swipes with her hand and the menu disintegrates.

...

Her weight dislodges a few old wood planks and they go tumbling down. Gemma loses her balance but halts her descent by grabbing onto a pole. As she does she cuts her hand on a sharp edge. Gemma holds her hand in pain.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        Aah

There is a strange looking cut in her hand; part organic, part digital.

...

                     GEMMA
        Damn it. This can't be possible. How am I not 
        not getting out of here?

That's when she notices a flickering blue light break through the bleak RED color of the world. It originates from a building ahead of her. The window on the second floor pulsates blue. But destruction approaches it in haste.

...

                     RAPHAEL
        Are you okay?
                     
                     GEMMA
        What the hell was that?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        It's an anti-virus program. It's designed to 
        to protect the Eitorian Defense Net.

...

                     GEMMA (cont'd)
        And why can't I get this thing off. This 
        shouldn't be possible?.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        IIt'ms so sorryno use trying. The EN has taken over 
        your brain. It's paralyzing you in the real 
        world. Gemma, you were never suppose to be 
        here. You're putting your life in danger.

Gemma backs away from Raphael and heads to the console he was working on. But when she gets close she hits the energy field.

...

Gemma turns to Raphael.

                     GEMMA (cont'd)'d)
        Who in the bloody hell are you?
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        WhoOkay, intake theit bloody hell areeasy. I'll show you?.

Raphael types a few commands in the device on his hand. And an image of another person forms around him. The image lasts only for a moment. It's the SOLDIER Gemma saved that many years ago.

...

                     RAPHAEL (cont'd)
        At first I just wanted to meet the woman who 
        who saved my life. I never thought I'll 
fall in 
      fall in love with you.
                     
                     GEMMA
        Love? You lied to me.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        I didn't lie to you Gemma. I wanted to tell 
        you who I really am, but I couldn't. 

...

                     GEMMA
        You're not getting this.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Gemma, listen to me. The data in these files 
        files will change everything we know about 
our two 
      our two nations.

Suddenly, drones materialize out of nowhere. That moment of distraction is enough for Raphael to snatch the control device from Gemma. He shoves her behind another machine in the lab.

...

                     RAPHAEL
        Great. You just painted a target on your 
        back.
                     
                     GEMMA
        I'll tell them the truth.
                     
                     RAPHAEL
        Do you really think they'll care? Do you? 
        Especially when they realize who we are to 
        each other?

...

Gemma exits the EN. She snatches the VR goggles from off her head and throws them on her desk.

...

Gemma swipes the folder from her computer to the mobile device and heads to the window. With the first few steps she holds her side in pain. But she overcomes her pain .

...

and continues on.

At the window, she looks down at a ledge which runs across the tenth floor of her apartment building. She takes a deep breath and steps out.

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