I got my first tidbit of feedback today. It was simple and to the point, but I think it's valid and worth thinking through. The Chaos character needs to be developed further. I agree. I have a few questions about Chaos:

  1. Who was he before he became Professor Chaos?
  2. What happened to him to push him over the edge?
  3. Why does he want the power of the signet?
  4. What's he planning to do with the power of the signet?

When I think of Professor Chaos I think of Doctor Horrible in "Dr. Horrible's Sing-along-blog".

Basically, Chaos is aptly named. He want to plunge the world into chaos. He has been betrayed by the system (still need to determine how) and now he wants to destroy the system completely, preferring chaos over order. Will spend some time fleshing it out.