So I think I'm drawing to a close on the script. I'm sure there are ways to improve it, but at this point I want to move to doing some pre visualization of the first scene of the script.
I've been debating whether I should hire someone to do a script analysis and suggest areas of improvement. My problem is this type of service is usually a hit and miss service. It would be nice if I have a bunch of people who would be willing to read the script and provide their independent feedback. This would be highly useful, but it's hard finding such an audience. Guess we'll see.